Nice
It's a nice melody. It has room for improvement though and I think it'd be nice to hear a little bit of that. It keeps repeating until half the song is done with, I hope you improve on that first because for such a short song we should listen to something that can spark our imagination. I love music and I often use it for inspiration. This is a nice melody and has a chance to be a beautiful melody, I can hear that. I hope you work on this piece just a little more because I would love to hear it.
If ever you do make a 2nd version, please send me a PM and I'll check it out as soon as I can!