Nanashi-Hikaru's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[L3] Endless Summer RMX]

I enjoyed it!

I didn't expect much from a short loop, but it brought my spirits up and I need to thank you for that.

I encurage you to make a song from this!
I think you did well with this little jit and I would love to hear more of it.

Improvement can be made in some areas, where I'll leave up to you, but if you ever make this a full song Please tell me about it.

[The Eternal Sleep]

It's good

It is a nice song, and I did enjoy it, but it was somewhat lacking with what I expected, from the piano mostly. I was hopping for something a litter more from the piano because it the instrument that draws the most attention to it's self in the music.

Again with many other songs I hear it's missing a climax, the point in the music where it draws in the listener's attention best. Sometimes it's hard to distinguish be many popular songs have these things.

I suggest you try listening to something and think of it not as music but a story being told not by words but by the feelings you get when listening to it. (Best done with Classical music)

I hope that then you understand what a climax in music it.

djmurderous responds:

good thinking my man I'll keep that in mind ;)

[Scribbler - Two Years]

Nice

It's a nice melody. It has room for improvement though and I think it'd be nice to hear a little bit of that. It keeps repeating until half the song is done with, I hope you improve on that first because for such a short song we should listen to something that can spark our imagination. I love music and I often use it for inspiration. This is a nice melody and has a chance to be a beautiful melody, I can hear that. I hope you work on this piece just a little more because I would love to hear it.

If ever you do make a 2nd version, please send me a PM and I'll check it out as soon as I can!

[Reasoner- Morning Light]

I don't hear many artists who should make CDs

You are one of those artists. I enjoy your music a lot, you have some wonderful talent. Even if this is one of your older pieces, this is still a beautiful song. You have nothing to be sorry about, this song's simplicity is one of it's best aspects, I wouldn't change a thing about it.
If you ever DO decide to make a CD, send me a message and I'll be your first costumer!

[Apoligize (One Republic) Remix]

I normally like original artists

But it is an enjoyable remix I give you that, you snuck a high score out of me and that it's self is impressive.

I've listened to some of your other songs, and they are quite good but will need improvement.

I'm sure I'll enjoy even more listening to you in the future.

[I Wanna Rock!!!]

Not bad for your forst submission

Good work, your music has a good tune, easy beat, and fun lyrics to sing.
All and all, a good job.
More impressive than some people's first submissions, but then, not a totally encompassing song.

I look forward to listening to your future songs and see how good an musician you are.

[An Angel Falls]

Alluring yet tranquil

This piece is hard to try and describe. Your voice certainly catches the attention of a lot of people around here, and all in a peaceful manner. This must be my favorite song of yours along with 7 of the other 'hardest to get to liking' critics I know of.

Many of us here are wondering why we haven't heard of you before we found you on Newgrounds, you certainly have a talent for music, and everyone here would certainly love to encourage you to try to go as far with your music as possible!

[When I Wake]

Rapturous

I enjoy your music most of any artist on or off Newgrounds.
This song expresses a certain exhilaration of feelings. It's calm, it's relaxing, and most of all refreshing.
I deeply enjoy your music, and would love to hear more songs like this in your collection, and I look forward to your next piece.

[Guitar Vs. Piano 1.2]

Intriguing!

I have never herd a piece quite like this, it brings vary interesting pictures to mind.
I only wish I could understand what was going though your head when you wrote this!
I'm sure even some of the worlds best musicians would stop to listen.

[Trippy Eeshk]

Good, but plenty of room for improvement

It's good, but it keeps repeating it's self, there isn't anything that really brings me into the song. Overall it just sounds like a background beat, and I feel you can do better.